Everyone's a critic

Here's a piece I did last year for a project. I don't know what happened here...well, actually I do:

This was the second finished illustration I produced for a single spread, after the first one was nixed on an editorial technicality. I had an extremely small amount of time to produce the art in (we've ALL been there, I am sure ;) and continue to visit, no doubt!) and, at the time, my scanner was not good enough for me to use it to create a master scan myself, and then work photoshop revisions into it. In the end, I ended up completing a third piece, based on this composition.

Well, we all make mistakes, and here is one of mine, for your enjoyment!! :)